同样是谈论美国一位有份量的人物的去世,美国总统Trump说:“The GREAT Billy Graham is dead. There was nobody likehim! He will be missed by Christians and all religions. A very special man.”
简单易懂。而有法律背景且出自于名校的前总统奥巴马是这样说的:“Billy Graham was a humble servantwho prayed for so many - and who, with wisdom and grace, gave hope and guidanceto generations of Americans.”
坏人。
2022-11-13不管是国际学校的学生还是美国高中的学生,听力与口语是他们的优势。也正因为这个优势,口语中简单句永远是他们最愿意用在写作里的。试想一下,如果我们把口头语用在写作中是怎样的感觉?用美国两位总统发布在twiter上文字,让大家来直观感觉一下口语体与书面体的区别。
同样是谈论美国一位有份量的人物的去世,美国总统Trump说:“The GREAT Billy Graham is dead. There was nobody likehim! He will be missed by Christians and all religions. A very special man.”
简单易懂。而有法律背景且出自于名校的前总统奥巴马是这样说的:“Billy Graham was a humble servantwho prayed for so many - and who, with wisdom and grace, gave hope and guidanceto generations of Americans.”
一边是四个简单句;一边是一个句子,这个句子有从句且有排比。对语言的驾驭能力一眼就能分辨出来。从这个例子,我们就会发现最能体现语言运用水平的是长难句的使用。那么,让简单句变成长难句每位老师都能教会学生。不过,很多学生一直不明白变成长难句后不同谓语动词的选择在文章中对语意的影响有何不同。下面,我们再来看一个例子。
四句简单句:Lucy is a student. She is a cutegirl. She comes from Beijing. She enjoys studying.
把这四个句子组成一个句子,有以下四种形式:
1. Lucy, astudent being a cute girl who comes from Beijing, enjoys studying.
2. Lucy, astudent being a cute girl who enjoys studying, comes from Beijing.
3. Lucy is astudent who is a cute girl coming from Beijing and enjoys studying.
4. Lucy is astudent who is a cute girl enjoyingstudying and comes from Beijing.
如果这四句话都放在段首,虽然他们都完全表达了四个简单句的意思,但是不同句式对下文却有决定意义。第一句和第二句都是只有一个主谓宾的结构,重点很突出,让读者一看就立刻明白下文会谈什么。第一句话接下来会谈Lucy如何喜欢学习或一些与学习相关的事情,而第二句话就会谈北京这个城市怎么样。如果第一个句子后面描述的是北京这个城市怎么好,那么读者读起来会觉得作者的思维太跳跃,语言的衔接缺乏一致性。第三句和第四话用的并列句,不用我说,相信大家看了之后就会有一种不知道重点的感觉,不如前两句话重点一目了然。